Reflection: Maybe next time I could put a little bit more effort and shorten down the sentences.
Kia ora! I am a Year 7 student in Room 5 at Ahipara School, in the Far North of New Zealand. My teacher is Ms Peters. This is where I share my learning. Please leave a positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.
Wednesday, May 12, 2021
Captivating Holiday Re-count Writing.
WALT: write captivating re-counts.
For the past week or so room 5 has been learning and writing about their holidays. Instead of writing boring words such as 'In the holidays I' we had to make more interesting sentences and give vivid detail. This is what I wrote.
Tuesday, May 11, 2021
Kawa Of Care Posters. Book Marks
WALT: Learn about bookmarks and make a post about them.
Today room 5 had been assigned a task that involved the Kawa Of Care. We had to make a google slide all about bookmarks. Today I made this
Maybe next time I could add a little bit more detail and explain a little bit more.
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