Kia ora! I am a Year 7 student in Room 5 at Ahipara School, in the Far North of New Zealand. My teacher is Ms Peters. This is where I share my learning. Please leave a positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.
Monday, May 4, 2020
Strange Plant
One morning I woke up and noticed that there was a light coming through my window. Instead of green leaves on the trees outside, I saw miles and miles of sand and strange-looking buildings. I ran downstairs ¨hurry and get ready¨ my mom said. ¨The landspeeder is being repaired, so you're going to have to walk to school!¨ I realized i was not on planet Earth anymore! As I grabbed my bag and took my breakfast I ran out the door, dropped my bag behind me, and looked around to see what was going on. Many people were happy as if nothing was happening, then I thought...they were brainwashed. All of a sudden a man in a black suit walked through the town and everyone was scared. All the people ran into their houses and looked out the window. I ran behind my house and I saw a family get taken away. I don't know what I was thinking but I walked slowly behind them hoping not to get caught. They led me to a deep pit with stairs leading down into the darkness. The woman screamed and stopped at the sight of seeing me, it caught the guards' attention and I ran into a cell. Seeing a man in the cell next to me. I found a piece of sharp stone and picked the lock. He yelled with joy and I ran knowing the guard would come from the sound. I saw a green short man standing in a cell next to me and I tried to help by picking the lock but I couldn't..then I was caught!
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Wow Samantha! Your story was filled with suspense and action! Next time you could try developing one of the ideas. For example: the man in the black coat, who was he? what was he doing there? why were they scared? It looks like you had a bit of fun writing it, ka pai to mahi!
ReplyDeleteYour story writing is amazing Samantha, filled with suspense, action and anticipation. Am loving it. Keep smiling.
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